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The Right Way To Wish by ~Autumn-rainbow:iconAutumn-rainbow:



When you wish upon a love
You know your heart may break

When you wish upon a dream
You know it ruins when you wake

When you wish upon a hope
You know your wish might fail

But when you wish upon YOURSELF
You know you will prevail
©2009-2010 ~Autumn-rainbow
:iconautumn-rainbow:

Author's Comments

i was really bored when i wrote this, but it basically says that if you believe in yourself you can do what you want to do, instead of always relying on fantasies like your life is a Disney movie.

yeah, its generally not how i usually think, but, whatever.

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:iconxbriarxrosex:
:sing:When a star is born,
They possess a gift or two.
One of them is this:
They have the power
To make a wish come true.

When you wish upon a star,
Makes no difference who you are.
Anything your heart desires
Will come to you.

If your heart is in your dreams,
No request is too extreme.
When you wish upon a star like dreamers do.

Fate is kind.
She gives to those who love,
Their sweet fulfillment of
Their secret longing.

Like a bolt out of the blue,
Fate steps in and sees it through,
When you wish upon a star like dreamers do.:sing:

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My literature account --> ~inkwishes

Excuse my English. I'm American.
:iconxbriarxrosex:
Just a general tip. Don't capitalize entire words. It's a bit cliche.

Aside from that, you're wrong. This doesn't suck. I really like it.

:hug:

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My literature account --> ~inkwishes

Excuse my English. I'm American.
:iconautumn-rainbow:
Sorry Thanks For The Tip
and at least someone likes it, thanks!

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Orange and Red Gold
Take shape in many pieces
As they fall from trees
:iconautumn-rainbow:
wow, that was so touching
you make it seem so much better then when Jiminy Cricket sang it in Pinnochio

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Orange and Red Gold
Take shape in many pieces
As they fall from trees
:iconxbriarxrosex:
rofl. I know. I have a gift.

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My literature account --> ~inkwishes

Excuse my English. I'm American.
:iconxbriarxrosex:
You're still new. Keep posting, stay active in the community, and you'll be a hit in no time!

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My literature account --> ~inkwishes

Excuse my English. I'm American.
:iconxbriarxrosex:
You know why I'm a dork? Every Disney song I know, I know every word of.

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My literature account --> ~inkwishes

Excuse my English. I'm American.
:iconautumn-rainbow:
no time meaning ten years from now

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Orange and Red Gold
Take shape in many pieces
As they fall from trees
:iconautumn-rainbow:
the strangest gift

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Orange and Red Gold
Take shape in many pieces
As they fall from trees

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